1. Broadcast Lead
SAN FRANCISCO LITTER
TIME: 20 SECONDS
SAN FRANCISCO LITTER MAY BE A THING OF THE PAST IF LAWMAKERS HAVE THEIR WAY. A MEASURE WAS PROPOSED TUESDAY BY ROSS MIRKARIMI THAT WOULD MAKE UNSOLICITED NEWSPAPER DELIVERIES A FINEABLE CRIME ALL THROUGHOUT THE CITY.
(-20-)
2. Broadcast News Story
COLLEGE STRESS
Time: 45 seconds
SINCE WHEN HAVE COLLEGE STUDENTS DREADED SPRING BREAK?
WITH SPRING BREAK RIGHT AROUND THE CORNER, COLLEGE STUDENTS MAY HAVE OTHER THINGS ON THEIR MINDS BESIDES FUN. ACCORDING TO A NATIONAL STUDY CONDUCTED BY EDISON MEDIA RESEARCH, FOUR IN TEN STUDENTS SAY THEY ENDURE STRESS OFTEN, WITH MANY STUDENTS STATING THEIR STRESS LEADS TO SLEEPLESS NIGHTS AND EATING DISORDERS.
(PLAY CLIP HERE OF STUDENT CHRIS CURRAN) 10 SECONDS
EVEN WORSE, IT SEEMS 9% OF THE STUDENTS SAY THEY HAD CONTEMPLATED SUICIDE. HOWEVER, IT SEEMS NOT ALL STUDENTS ARE HEADING OFF TO SPRING BREAK STRESSED AS SIX IN TEN STUDENTS SAY THEY ENJOY LIFE.
(-45-)
3. Broadcast Style Exercise
NORTHWEST AIRLINES CEO, FRANK DEWITT, ANNOUNCED TODAY THAT THE AIRLINES IS CUTTING ITS DOMESTIC FARES BY UP TO 40% FOR HOLIDAY TRAVELERS AS A HOLIDAY GIFT TO ITS CUSTOMERS. TICKETS MUST BE PURCHASED BY FRIDAY FOR TRAVEL BETWEEN NOVEMBER 12TH AND JANUARY 14TH IN THE LOWER 48 STATES, ALASKA AND CANADA. DISCOUNTS VARY DEPENDING ON TRAVEL DATES AND ARE NOT AVAILABLE ON CERTAIN POPULAR DAYS, INCLUDING THE 23RD AND 26TH OF BOTH NOVEMBER AND DECEMBER. WITH THE DISCOUNTED, NON-REFUNDABLE FARES, A PASSENGER COULD TRAVEL ROUND-TRIP BETWEEN BOSTON AND SAN FRANCISCO FOR FOUR HUNDRED DOLLARS ON CERTAIN DAYS.
Saturday, March 22, 2008
Saturday, March 15, 2008
Week 8 - Copy Edit the World
The text reads "It that really you?" instead of "Is that really you?"- Via Super Mario 64 on both the Nintendo DS and the Nintendo 64 (both are renditions of the same game)
Going through my wallet, I noticed I had an expired card. However right before I threw it away, I noticed they misspelled "thru" as trhu. The card is used to receive discounts at several retailers- Via Microsoft, Xbox Live
The text should read "several new bits of information" (or something comparable) instead of "several new info"- Via ps3fanboy.com
It should read online play has been improved, not have been- Via ps3fanboy.com
The text reads, "going forwards…” It should read going forward.- Via Joystiq.com
The word "be" is missing from "our program will supporting LCD monitors that are..."- Via official PG&E website
Week 8 - Soft Broadcast Lead
Those of you planning on taking mass transit out of Manhattan may need to reconsider this afternoon, as the North Commuter Railroad has lost power.
According to Dona Evans, a squirrel was seen scampering around on the power lines of the transit system. Somehow, the unfortunate adventurer got electrocuted and set off an incredible chain of events. At the site of the electrocution, a wire wrestled free from its bracket. The wire then hung limp above the track. As a train passed, the wire became entangled in the train's tracks, and ultimately tore down a large portion of the Railroad's power system.
According to Dona Evans, a squirrel was seen scampering around on the power lines of the transit system. Somehow, the unfortunate adventurer got electrocuted and set off an incredible chain of events. At the site of the electrocution, a wire wrestled free from its bracket. The wire then hung limp above the track. As a train passed, the wire became entangled in the train's tracks, and ultimately tore down a large portion of the Railroad's power system.
Saturday, March 8, 2008
Week 7 - Profile
Today, you will find Dona Ricardez taking care of her grandchildren. Each morning she starts her day off by making breakfast for the entire family along with all the other meals of the day, cleaning the house, and whenever possible, sitting in the backyard drinking her favorite drink, Raspberry Nestea, listening to her favorite mariachi music. Compared to her younger years her life "couldn't be any more perfect."
Dona Ricardez was born on a cold July day in 1926, when as she says, “Things were quite different.” The sky was blue, the air was sweet, and above all things, she was in her motherland, Mexico. She was the fourth addition to the family, but most certainly not the last. After her birth, a whopping 10 more kids were added to her family, totaling 14 siblings all together. But according to her, having this many kids back then, was so normal, it was actually looked down on to not have at least 10 in your family. Wow. She commented on the stereotype of Mexicans having big families, and just laughed. “If you didn’t have a big family, you were way down in the social class. Having a big family meant you respected life. Having a big family meant you loved your culture. Having a big family meant you loved being Mexican.”
Her parents did not have very much money in Mexico. Her father was a farm worker, and they had their own garden in the front yard. “It was our pride and joy,” she began to say. “My father was out there so much, that it seemed as though he loved the garden more than us at times. But we all knew without the garden there would be no food to eat. And with no food, there would be no family.” Each and every day, her father would go out and pick what she called, “the single most beautiful vegetable that the garden had to offer – the one that glistened in the Mexican sun – the one that caught my father’s eye.”
Then one day, the garden died, and the father could not bring it back to life (so to speak). “There was a new scent in the air. It was a lonely harmful scent that was ruining not only the air we breathed, but also the family bonds we had so closely adhered to.” Her parents knew bad times were coming and realized that there was only one hope for her.
Their neighbor’s son was soon to go to America to get a job as a machine worker to replace the American boys who were off fighting the fight of their lives in WWII. It just so happened that the families were very close and they had discussed the possible marriage of their children for some time. In addition, they thought with the current situation that this was the best thing that they could possibly do. The funny thing is though, Dona Ricardez already was in love with this boy. They had been secretly seeing each other for some time. “I was the most beautiful girl in my town. My hair was long and brown. My skin was soft and smooth. Every boy wanted me, but my heart was set on that one special man.”
The way she describes herself may seem a little “cocky”, but when she showed me a picture of her younger days, I definitely agreed with her. She was gorgeous. Well, when their parents set them up to be married, they left to America to make it on their own. She claims she does not remember much about the process from America, except for the fact that it was easy, until she got here. When they got here, work was easy to find for her husband, because as I said earlier, all the “little white boys” as she refers to them, had left for the war overseas.
Well, as soon as she got to America and was all settled in, not in a barrio, but in a middle class white neighborhood, she found out that she was pregnant. She said finding out that she was pregnant was the single most important moment in her life. She remembers that she was wearing a white dress, and had her hair all done up and was on her way to the local store. She said when she felt the kick; she nearly fell to the floor and drowned in a sea of tears. She knew then, that everything was going to be perfect, at least until the war ended. Then everything changed.
When the war ended, everyone wanted the Mexicans to leave. “They wanted us out of there. Apparently, we were stinking up the place and painting the town brown. The white people didn’t want anything to do with that.” Fearing for their lives, they had no choice but to move over her husband’s brother's house about 6 hours away by car. They were so rashly pushed out of their home; they did not have time to take many of their belongings and were unable to pack many family heirlooms. She started crying as she told me that the people of the city blamed all their problems on the Mexicans, and refused to tell me the name of the town, because she vowed never to say it again. She says that she wishes only one thing; that she could have at least taken the dress her mother had made for her before she left Mexico. She wishes more than anything that she could have held onto that dear memory.
She was crying so much when we got to this point of her life, that I felt it best to not try to get any more information out of her. I could see the pain and despair in her eyes, and I could truly feel her anger. I even found myself beginning to tear up uncontrollably as she spoke. So, without verbally saying so, we decided to move on to where her story was a little happier.
After they were forced to live in an isolated community only for Mexicans, Dona Ricardez came to realize that if there was any future for her family, she had to learn English. So she went to school right away to learn English. Her Spanish speaking community looked down on her and saw this as a means of turning away from her heritage. But she did not care, because she knew that she had to do it for her family. When she speaks of going to school for the first time, she tells of all the good memories and says there were hardly any bad memories. "Learning is learning. You get out of it, what you put into it."
Her husband did not have time to go to school, because he was working ridiculous hours trying to make ends meet. So when he came home from work, him and his wife would sit down and do her homework together. She then would reiterate what she learned at school to her children, teaching them the best possible English she could. In fact, for a little while she says, “I lost sense of being a Mexican. I started making hamburgers and hotdogs, instead of beans and tortillas, and I wouldn’t allow the kids to speak Spanish at home.” She continued this until she felt that her English was well enough to get by, to at least get some people to stop looking down at her.
She says the rest of her life “was nothing more than a struggle against the white man that I just recently won august 24 2005: the day my mijo, my pride and joy started college at San Jose State University. Him being the first to go to college really makes me proud. And kids like you doing papers on controversial things like this, really brings joy to my heart. America truly has changed, and I am so proud to live here."
In regards to the memories she could not speak of, she apologizes because they are still so powerful, and she can hardly even speak of them to herself. She asked me to make sure I included this in the paper, and I have no problem including it.
“Coming to America was both a rewarding experience, and a hard journey. Throughout my life, I have experienced racism, prejudices, and some things I do not care to mention, but I would not change any of them for the world. America is truly the land of opportunity, and I would relive every moment again, if it meant that my life would turn out the same. I love this place, my family, and my life.”
Dona Ricardez was born on a cold July day in 1926, when as she says, “Things were quite different.” The sky was blue, the air was sweet, and above all things, she was in her motherland, Mexico. She was the fourth addition to the family, but most certainly not the last. After her birth, a whopping 10 more kids were added to her family, totaling 14 siblings all together. But according to her, having this many kids back then, was so normal, it was actually looked down on to not have at least 10 in your family. Wow. She commented on the stereotype of Mexicans having big families, and just laughed. “If you didn’t have a big family, you were way down in the social class. Having a big family meant you respected life. Having a big family meant you loved your culture. Having a big family meant you loved being Mexican.”
Her parents did not have very much money in Mexico. Her father was a farm worker, and they had their own garden in the front yard. “It was our pride and joy,” she began to say. “My father was out there so much, that it seemed as though he loved the garden more than us at times. But we all knew without the garden there would be no food to eat. And with no food, there would be no family.” Each and every day, her father would go out and pick what she called, “the single most beautiful vegetable that the garden had to offer – the one that glistened in the Mexican sun – the one that caught my father’s eye.”
Then one day, the garden died, and the father could not bring it back to life (so to speak). “There was a new scent in the air. It was a lonely harmful scent that was ruining not only the air we breathed, but also the family bonds we had so closely adhered to.” Her parents knew bad times were coming and realized that there was only one hope for her.
Their neighbor’s son was soon to go to America to get a job as a machine worker to replace the American boys who were off fighting the fight of their lives in WWII. It just so happened that the families were very close and they had discussed the possible marriage of their children for some time. In addition, they thought with the current situation that this was the best thing that they could possibly do. The funny thing is though, Dona Ricardez already was in love with this boy. They had been secretly seeing each other for some time. “I was the most beautiful girl in my town. My hair was long and brown. My skin was soft and smooth. Every boy wanted me, but my heart was set on that one special man.”
The way she describes herself may seem a little “cocky”, but when she showed me a picture of her younger days, I definitely agreed with her. She was gorgeous. Well, when their parents set them up to be married, they left to America to make it on their own. She claims she does not remember much about the process from America, except for the fact that it was easy, until she got here. When they got here, work was easy to find for her husband, because as I said earlier, all the “little white boys” as she refers to them, had left for the war overseas.
Well, as soon as she got to America and was all settled in, not in a barrio, but in a middle class white neighborhood, she found out that she was pregnant. She said finding out that she was pregnant was the single most important moment in her life. She remembers that she was wearing a white dress, and had her hair all done up and was on her way to the local store. She said when she felt the kick; she nearly fell to the floor and drowned in a sea of tears. She knew then, that everything was going to be perfect, at least until the war ended. Then everything changed.
When the war ended, everyone wanted the Mexicans to leave. “They wanted us out of there. Apparently, we were stinking up the place and painting the town brown. The white people didn’t want anything to do with that.” Fearing for their lives, they had no choice but to move over her husband’s brother's house about 6 hours away by car. They were so rashly pushed out of their home; they did not have time to take many of their belongings and were unable to pack many family heirlooms. She started crying as she told me that the people of the city blamed all their problems on the Mexicans, and refused to tell me the name of the town, because she vowed never to say it again. She says that she wishes only one thing; that she could have at least taken the dress her mother had made for her before she left Mexico. She wishes more than anything that she could have held onto that dear memory.
She was crying so much when we got to this point of her life, that I felt it best to not try to get any more information out of her. I could see the pain and despair in her eyes, and I could truly feel her anger. I even found myself beginning to tear up uncontrollably as she spoke. So, without verbally saying so, we decided to move on to where her story was a little happier.
After they were forced to live in an isolated community only for Mexicans, Dona Ricardez came to realize that if there was any future for her family, she had to learn English. So she went to school right away to learn English. Her Spanish speaking community looked down on her and saw this as a means of turning away from her heritage. But she did not care, because she knew that she had to do it for her family. When she speaks of going to school for the first time, she tells of all the good memories and says there were hardly any bad memories. "Learning is learning. You get out of it, what you put into it."
Her husband did not have time to go to school, because he was working ridiculous hours trying to make ends meet. So when he came home from work, him and his wife would sit down and do her homework together. She then would reiterate what she learned at school to her children, teaching them the best possible English she could. In fact, for a little while she says, “I lost sense of being a Mexican. I started making hamburgers and hotdogs, instead of beans and tortillas, and I wouldn’t allow the kids to speak Spanish at home.” She continued this until she felt that her English was well enough to get by, to at least get some people to stop looking down at her.
She says the rest of her life “was nothing more than a struggle against the white man that I just recently won august 24 2005: the day my mijo, my pride and joy started college at San Jose State University. Him being the first to go to college really makes me proud. And kids like you doing papers on controversial things like this, really brings joy to my heart. America truly has changed, and I am so proud to live here."
In regards to the memories she could not speak of, she apologizes because they are still so powerful, and she can hardly even speak of them to herself. She asked me to make sure I included this in the paper, and I have no problem including it.
“Coming to America was both a rewarding experience, and a hard journey. Throughout my life, I have experienced racism, prejudices, and some things I do not care to mention, but I would not change any of them for the world. America is truly the land of opportunity, and I would relive every moment again, if it meant that my life would turn out the same. I love this place, my family, and my life.”
Week 7 - Top News # 6
Are You Serious?
According to a story found on Reuters, the mayor of Bordeaux, a village southwest of France, has told residents to not die- or else. He bases these claims on the fact that the cemetery, known to the locals as Sarpourenx, is filled to the brim and is unable to accommodate any more bodies.
The title of the article is 'Cemetery full, mayor tells locals not to die'. How can you ignore that? It's truly scary to think how far ahead we are than the rest of the world. To have a town meeting and blatantly forbid anyone from dying, and threatening them with sever punishment is beyond me.
I wonder what sort of punishment he has in mind. Perhaps an exile from the church? Cremation? I certainly hope they come up with a new plan of action. I feel for the town of 260 people. I mean, not being able to die. What's the point in living then?
This story may not be as groundbreaking as my previous top news stories, but it was too bizarre not to share with you and whoever else reads my rant on the world.
Link found here: http://www.reuters.com/article/oddlyEnoughNews/idUSL0552076620080305
According to a story found on Reuters, the mayor of Bordeaux, a village southwest of France, has told residents to not die- or else. He bases these claims on the fact that the cemetery, known to the locals as Sarpourenx, is filled to the brim and is unable to accommodate any more bodies.
The title of the article is 'Cemetery full, mayor tells locals not to die'. How can you ignore that? It's truly scary to think how far ahead we are than the rest of the world. To have a town meeting and blatantly forbid anyone from dying, and threatening them with sever punishment is beyond me.
I wonder what sort of punishment he has in mind. Perhaps an exile from the church? Cremation? I certainly hope they come up with a new plan of action. I feel for the town of 260 people. I mean, not being able to die. What's the point in living then?
This story may not be as groundbreaking as my previous top news stories, but it was too bizarre not to share with you and whoever else reads my rant on the world.
Link found here: http://www.reuters.com/article/oddlyEnoughNews/idUSL0552076620080305
Week 7 - Reporting With Numbers
1) School Funding
66% of the school's budget comes from the state.
5% of the school's budget comes from student tuition
28% of the school's budget comes from fees, grants, and gifts
The most significant funding source is obviously from the state as it accounts for 2/3 of all funding. The next most significant funding source is from fees, grants, and gifts totaling just less than 1/4 of the budget. The least significant source of funding is tuition, brazing only 5% of the budget. Make it free then!
In plain words, the biggest contributor to the school's budget is the state, accounting for more than half of the budget. Following not very close behind is the money gathered from fees, grants, and gifts. That money accounts for a quarter of the budget. Last and certainly least is the small impact tuition has on the budget, accounting for a meager 5%.
2) Prison Sentences
The average prison term is 22 months or 1 year 10 months
The average probation term is also 22 months or 1 year 10 months
The median prison term is 1 year (12 months)
With this particular set of data, the most accurate description of prison terms is the median. The fact that one person received a 7-year sentence throws the average data out of sync. You can tell at first glance that the most common sentence is 1 year, without even crunching any numbers.
3) Restaurant Food Sales
(The following information is based on the California states sales tax - 7.25%)
If the state legislature were to enact a law exempting restaurant food sales from sales tax many fast-food patrons have the potential to save a lot of money.
If one were to eat out once a week, spending only $5 per meal, at the end of the year you would have saved $18.85.
If that same person were to eat out once a week but spend $20 per meal, at the end of the year he/she would have saved $75.40. There's an extra Xbox 360 game, or another textbook.
66% of the school's budget comes from the state.
5% of the school's budget comes from student tuition
28% of the school's budget comes from fees, grants, and gifts
The most significant funding source is obviously from the state as it accounts for 2/3 of all funding. The next most significant funding source is from fees, grants, and gifts totaling just less than 1/4 of the budget. The least significant source of funding is tuition, brazing only 5% of the budget. Make it free then!
In plain words, the biggest contributor to the school's budget is the state, accounting for more than half of the budget. Following not very close behind is the money gathered from fees, grants, and gifts. That money accounts for a quarter of the budget. Last and certainly least is the small impact tuition has on the budget, accounting for a meager 5%.
2) Prison Sentences
The average prison term is 22 months or 1 year 10 months
The average probation term is also 22 months or 1 year 10 months
The median prison term is 1 year (12 months)
With this particular set of data, the most accurate description of prison terms is the median. The fact that one person received a 7-year sentence throws the average data out of sync. You can tell at first glance that the most common sentence is 1 year, without even crunching any numbers.
3) Restaurant Food Sales
(The following information is based on the California states sales tax - 7.25%)
If the state legislature were to enact a law exempting restaurant food sales from sales tax many fast-food patrons have the potential to save a lot of money.
If one were to eat out once a week, spending only $5 per meal, at the end of the year you would have saved $18.85.
If that same person were to eat out once a week but spend $20 per meal, at the end of the year he/she would have saved $75.40. There's an extra Xbox 360 game, or another textbook.
Week 7 - AP Style Quiz S-Z
1) He thought of Smokey Bear every time he got near a smoldering fire or entered a smoky room. (3)
2) The forecast is for lower temperatures, falling to the low 30s by tonight. If the rain continues, there could be a traveler's advisory. (3)
3) To celebrate Veterans Day, the anniversary of the armistice that ended World War I, troops of former soldiers will march down Main Street carrying U.S. flags. (3)
4) His weeklong ordeal will be finished when finals week is over. Until then, his well-being is in doubt. (2)
5) A 19-year-old youth was arrested Monday for carrying a Saturday night special without a permit. After being released on bail, he disappeared. His whereabouts is unknown. (4)
6) When he heard the building plan for the new high school had been rejected, Bill pulled out his stationery to write a letter of protest. (2)
7) Ben really knows his Scriptures, but he knows little about the Talmud or the Shariah. (3)
2) The forecast is for lower temperatures, falling to the low 30s by tonight. If the rain continues, there could be a traveler's advisory. (3)
3) To celebrate Veterans Day, the anniversary of the armistice that ended World War I, troops of former soldiers will march down Main Street carrying U.S. flags. (3)
4) His weeklong ordeal will be finished when finals week is over. Until then, his well-being is in doubt. (2)
5) A 19-year-old youth was arrested Monday for carrying a Saturday night special without a permit. After being released on bail, he disappeared. His whereabouts is unknown. (4)
6) When he heard the building plan for the new high school had been rejected, Bill pulled out his stationery to write a letter of protest. (2)
7) Ben really knows his Scriptures, but he knows little about the Talmud or the Shariah. (3)
Monday, March 3, 2008
Week 6 - AP Style Quiz M-R
1) He hopes to make $1 billion by the time he’s 40. Already he figures his net worth is between $2 million and $3 million, depending on current stock prices. (3)
2) Lt. Cmdr. John Carpenter was a Mishipman at the U.S. Naval Academy and served in the 7th Fleet. (4)
3) Twenty-one winners were named Two days after the third annual procrastination awards ceremony. (3)
4) It was a one-sided game, and he was a poor loser. After losing the playoff when his ball went out of bounds, he made an off-color remark that could be heard in the stands. (4)
5) Hundreds of people attended the race on Sunday to watch 75 top bicyclists pedal across the finish line. (3)
6) Every winter, the Joneses and the Kinneys pore over travel brochures, planning their summer trip together. This year they’re hoping to go to Panama City, Fla. (3)
2) Lt. Cmdr. John Carpenter was a Mishipman at the U.S. Naval Academy and served in the 7th Fleet. (4)
3) Twenty-one winners were named Two days after the third annual procrastination awards ceremony. (3)
4) It was a one-sided game, and he was a poor loser. After losing the playoff when his ball went out of bounds, he made an off-color remark that could be heard in the stands. (4)
5) Hundreds of people attended the race on Sunday to watch 75 top bicyclists pedal across the finish line. (3)
6) Every winter, the Joneses and the Kinneys pore over travel brochures, planning their summer trip together. This year they’re hoping to go to Panama City, Fla. (3)
Saturday, March 1, 2008
Week 6 - News Story #5
Runaway Truck
At around 1:30 p.m. yesterday a runaway truck smashed into a home on Moeser Lane in El Cerrito after doing massive damage along its path and knocking out power not only in El Cerrito, but also Berkeley and Richmond.
El Cerrito Detective Sgt. Shawn Maples was one of the first rescuers on the scene. When he arrived he saw an overturned 10-wheeled asphalt truck protruding from a single-story home. The home was engulfed in flames. He heard screams coming from under the debris near the collision site, and after some digging erected the driver of the vehicle. The driver’s legs were all mangled making movement on his own impossible. “We dragged him out in a heartbeat while the truck went up in flames. I just wanted to get him out of there,” Detective Sgt. Shawn Maples said.
While it was careening down Maples street, the truck sent a parked electrician’s vehicle soaring onto Richmond Street and entangled a sport utility vehicle in some shrubbery near the burning house. The vehicle had a man and a boy inside.
A Honda in the path of the truck was so severely damaged, rescuers needed the Jaws of Life to fetch the driver from the vehicle. A sport utility vehicle became entangled in some shrubbery near the burning house as well, with a boy and a man inside.
Ruben Sharma, who lives across the street from the collision site said, “First, I thought it was a major earthquake. This is unbelievable.” His front yard depicted the aftermath of the crash, with broken glass, car parts, bricks, and splintered wood thrown about all over the place.
The driver of the asphalt truck, a San Jose man, is listed in serious but stable condition at John Muir Medical Center in Walnut Creek. Both of his legs were broken in the crash.
No other injuries have been reported.
At around 1:30 p.m. yesterday a runaway truck smashed into a home on Moeser Lane in El Cerrito after doing massive damage along its path and knocking out power not only in El Cerrito, but also Berkeley and Richmond.
El Cerrito Detective Sgt. Shawn Maples was one of the first rescuers on the scene. When he arrived he saw an overturned 10-wheeled asphalt truck protruding from a single-story home. The home was engulfed in flames. He heard screams coming from under the debris near the collision site, and after some digging erected the driver of the vehicle. The driver’s legs were all mangled making movement on his own impossible. “We dragged him out in a heartbeat while the truck went up in flames. I just wanted to get him out of there,” Detective Sgt. Shawn Maples said.
While it was careening down Maples street, the truck sent a parked electrician’s vehicle soaring onto Richmond Street and entangled a sport utility vehicle in some shrubbery near the burning house. The vehicle had a man and a boy inside.
A Honda in the path of the truck was so severely damaged, rescuers needed the Jaws of Life to fetch the driver from the vehicle. A sport utility vehicle became entangled in some shrubbery near the burning house as well, with a boy and a man inside.
Ruben Sharma, who lives across the street from the collision site said, “First, I thought it was a major earthquake. This is unbelievable.” His front yard depicted the aftermath of the crash, with broken glass, car parts, bricks, and splintered wood thrown about all over the place.
The driver of the asphalt truck, a San Jose man, is listed in serious but stable condition at John Muir Medical Center in Walnut Creek. Both of his legs were broken in the crash.
No other injuries have been reported.
Week 6 - Top News
Natural Born Citizen
It has been brought to the attention of America that Senator John McCain may in fact not be a natural born citizen. As stated in the Constitution of the United States, only a natural born citizen can be elected president. Well, where do we say the "United States" starts and ends, with so many of our territories and bases overseas? What about those children?
It appears there used to be a law, passed in 1790, that stated, "children born outside the U.S. 'shall be considered as natural born citizens'." According to MSNBC this give us an idea as to what the founders were thinking at the time of the conception of the both the Constitution and the law.
Ted Olson most certainly says it best. "The plain meaning of 'natural born citizen' includes persons who become citizens of this nation 'naturally,' that is, by virtue of their birth to parents who are citizens, particularly when the birth takes place on territory occupied and controlled by the United States, in Senator McCain's case, a U.S. military base in the Panama Canal Zone."
Honestly though, who cares? I'm so tired of this nation always advocating the nation of the free, when there are so many old, old, OLD customs that we still adhere to. The two party system is useless by today's standards. Why don't we just vote for whomever we think has the best solutions for our nations problems? Why do we still need an Electoral College? How can a president win the popular vote but lose the electoral vote? Garbage. Blasphemy.
Look. Its time we actually lived up to what we claim to be. If this is the land of the free, then why not let us decide who we want to be president. Who cares if a candidate wasn't born of this country? If that person seems fit to run, then by all means let them run. The people will decide. And seriously, there are so many checks and balances in place, they swear like the president, even if he were to abuse his power (speaking in the sense that congress used to be afraid of having a non-natural born citizen as president because they were afraid of an outside tyrant coming in and taking over) he wouldn't get very far.
And another thing. Black, white, Asian, Mexican, male or female - all should be able to run. All of this mumbo jumbo, about all men are created equal is out of date. All people are created equal, and if they have a life ambition to become president, let them try. I for one don't vote on the premise that the president needs to be an old white man with useless ideals in the Democratic Party. I vote (with what little choices the government allows me) for the best candidate. Period.
This story, although it got a rouse out of me, has every news value associated with it minus proximity.
It has impact because all the people of this nation will be affected in one way or another if and when the decision on this issue comes to pass.
It most certainly has timeliness and currency because elections are quickly approaching.
It has prominence because it is regarding a presidential candidate.
It has bizarreness in the sense that how can you say a baby born from someone protecting this country is not a natural born citizen? That doesn't make any sense whatsoever.
Everything about this story screams conflict.
Link found here: http://www.msnbc.msn.com/id/23415028/
It has been brought to the attention of America that Senator John McCain may in fact not be a natural born citizen. As stated in the Constitution of the United States, only a natural born citizen can be elected president. Well, where do we say the "United States" starts and ends, with so many of our territories and bases overseas? What about those children?
It appears there used to be a law, passed in 1790, that stated, "children born outside the U.S. 'shall be considered as natural born citizens'." According to MSNBC this give us an idea as to what the founders were thinking at the time of the conception of the both the Constitution and the law.
Ted Olson most certainly says it best. "The plain meaning of 'natural born citizen' includes persons who become citizens of this nation 'naturally,' that is, by virtue of their birth to parents who are citizens, particularly when the birth takes place on territory occupied and controlled by the United States, in Senator McCain's case, a U.S. military base in the Panama Canal Zone."
Honestly though, who cares? I'm so tired of this nation always advocating the nation of the free, when there are so many old, old, OLD customs that we still adhere to. The two party system is useless by today's standards. Why don't we just vote for whomever we think has the best solutions for our nations problems? Why do we still need an Electoral College? How can a president win the popular vote but lose the electoral vote? Garbage. Blasphemy.
Look. Its time we actually lived up to what we claim to be. If this is the land of the free, then why not let us decide who we want to be president. Who cares if a candidate wasn't born of this country? If that person seems fit to run, then by all means let them run. The people will decide. And seriously, there are so many checks and balances in place, they swear like the president, even if he were to abuse his power (speaking in the sense that congress used to be afraid of having a non-natural born citizen as president because they were afraid of an outside tyrant coming in and taking over) he wouldn't get very far.
And another thing. Black, white, Asian, Mexican, male or female - all should be able to run. All of this mumbo jumbo, about all men are created equal is out of date. All people are created equal, and if they have a life ambition to become president, let them try. I for one don't vote on the premise that the president needs to be an old white man with useless ideals in the Democratic Party. I vote (with what little choices the government allows me) for the best candidate. Period.
This story, although it got a rouse out of me, has every news value associated with it minus proximity.
It has impact because all the people of this nation will be affected in one way or another if and when the decision on this issue comes to pass.
It most certainly has timeliness and currency because elections are quickly approaching.
It has prominence because it is regarding a presidential candidate.
It has bizarreness in the sense that how can you say a baby born from someone protecting this country is not a natural born citizen? That doesn't make any sense whatsoever.
Everything about this story screams conflict.
Link found here: http://www.msnbc.msn.com/id/23415028/
Week 6 - Redefining News
First and foremost I most certainly agree that news is being redefined on a daily basis. However, I wouldn’t go so far as to say its context or existing mediums are being replaced. If anything, news is being more acutely focused, with the ability to search, re-search, perform an advanced search etc. Instead of having to dig through a newspaper or a magazine, with no guarantee that you’ll find what you seek, journalism is slowly adopting better ways to communicate information quickly.
The search button without a doubt is the greatest addition to the information age this century. Sure that’s bold to say when we have done so much in regards to information and streamlining it, but just take a second and stop and think about it. Never before in the history of humanity has it been so easy to find the information we seek. I will go so far as to say that without the search button (function), the computer ends up being just another means of saving paper, but not of saving time – an energy waster.
The best link on Ryan Sholin’s page is Everyblock by the Knight News Challenge project. It takes searching and focusing to an entirely new level. Being able to narrow the news down to that which happens on your very street is incredible. The amount of work it would take to do that on your own, digging through newspapers one by one, is beyond belief. Now that all the information is in front of you, you can do something with it rather than wasting all of your time just gathering it. If there were a lot of robberies on the street you were planning on moving to, perhaps you should reconsider. Likewise, if there were a lot of successful events for the community on a different street, perhaps that street gets bumped up to the new choice.
News is just news until you reach the level where it becomes personal. A story about a man dying in a car accident in New York to a resident of California doesn’t have nearly the same impact as say a little boy getting run over on your street. Hey, wait a minute. Suddenly I care. Whether its good or not, that’s the way we operate. We don’t give a damn, until it happens to us.
Link found here: http://www.everyblock.com/
The search button without a doubt is the greatest addition to the information age this century. Sure that’s bold to say when we have done so much in regards to information and streamlining it, but just take a second and stop and think about it. Never before in the history of humanity has it been so easy to find the information we seek. I will go so far as to say that without the search button (function), the computer ends up being just another means of saving paper, but not of saving time – an energy waster.
The best link on Ryan Sholin’s page is Everyblock by the Knight News Challenge project. It takes searching and focusing to an entirely new level. Being able to narrow the news down to that which happens on your very street is incredible. The amount of work it would take to do that on your own, digging through newspapers one by one, is beyond belief. Now that all the information is in front of you, you can do something with it rather than wasting all of your time just gathering it. If there were a lot of robberies on the street you were planning on moving to, perhaps you should reconsider. Likewise, if there were a lot of successful events for the community on a different street, perhaps that street gets bumped up to the new choice.
News is just news until you reach the level where it becomes personal. A story about a man dying in a car accident in New York to a resident of California doesn’t have nearly the same impact as say a little boy getting run over on your street. Hey, wait a minute. Suddenly I care. Whether its good or not, that’s the way we operate. We don’t give a damn, until it happens to us.
Link found here: http://www.everyblock.com/
Saturday, February 23, 2008
Week 5 - Top News
According to a story on MSNBC, a woman was awarded $9M after being dropped from her health insurance provider in 2004. When Patsy Bates, 52, found out that she had breast cancer, her health insurance, Health Net Inc., dropped her coverage and left her with more than $129,000 in unpaid hospital bills.
On Friday, arbitration judge, Sam Cianchetti ruled in favor of Ms. Bates, and awarded her million of dollars in punitive damages.
This story really hits home with me. Upon reading about her situation, I put myself in her place, and I immediately connected with her. Being diagnosed with cancer, and going through ridiculous amounts of treatment would already be more than I could bear. But then, to be dropped from your insurance, in the middle of care, is an absolute atrocity. I for one hope this sets an example for the rest of the insurance agencies worldwide.
"Obviously we regret the way that this has turned out, but we are intent on fixing the processes to maintain the public trust," spokesman David Olson said.
How can you drop someone when they actually need something in return? Most of the time you get free money from the rest of us that are in good health. You mean to tell me, you don't have a few hundred thousand lying around that you could give to people that actually, truly need it? Unacceptable. Perhaps we do need national health coverage like the other countries?
This story definitely has impact, because there are only a small percentage of people who do not have health insurance. I would say this story also has currency as well, seeing as how the hot topic with the candidates now is health care. And finally this story also has conflict. When the little person goes up against the big company, the outcome usually isn't favorable.
Link found here: http://www.msnbc.msn.com/id/23307983/
On Friday, arbitration judge, Sam Cianchetti ruled in favor of Ms. Bates, and awarded her million of dollars in punitive damages.
This story really hits home with me. Upon reading about her situation, I put myself in her place, and I immediately connected with her. Being diagnosed with cancer, and going through ridiculous amounts of treatment would already be more than I could bear. But then, to be dropped from your insurance, in the middle of care, is an absolute atrocity. I for one hope this sets an example for the rest of the insurance agencies worldwide.
"Obviously we regret the way that this has turned out, but we are intent on fixing the processes to maintain the public trust," spokesman David Olson said.
How can you drop someone when they actually need something in return? Most of the time you get free money from the rest of us that are in good health. You mean to tell me, you don't have a few hundred thousand lying around that you could give to people that actually, truly need it? Unacceptable. Perhaps we do need national health coverage like the other countries?
This story definitely has impact, because there are only a small percentage of people who do not have health insurance. I would say this story also has currency as well, seeing as how the hot topic with the candidates now is health care. And finally this story also has conflict. When the little person goes up against the big company, the outcome usually isn't favorable.
Link found here: http://www.msnbc.msn.com/id/23307983/
Week 5 - AP Style Quiz I-L
1) The last time she played soccer, she sustained a serious injury to her knee. Sometimes it's hard to understand why she wants to keep playing. (2)
2) He was indicted on an assault charge, but his lawyer said the case against him is circumstantial and she is sure the inquiry will exonerate him. (2)
3) He knows it isn’t kosher, but green Jell-O is his favorite dessert. This admission has prompted his friends to question both his taste and his judgment. (3)
4) Now that he has DSL, he finds it much easier to go online to check his e-mail and download files. (3)
5) He stood at the lectern, addressing his longtime colleagues at the Knights of Columbus. (3)
2) He was indicted on an assault charge, but his lawyer said the case against him is circumstantial and she is sure the inquiry will exonerate him. (2)
3) He knows it isn’t kosher, but green Jell-O is his favorite dessert. This admission has prompted his friends to question both his taste and his judgment. (3)
4) Now that he has DSL, he finds it much easier to go online to check his e-mail and download files. (3)
5) He stood at the lectern, addressing his longtime colleagues at the Knights of Columbus. (3)
Week 5 - Copy Edit the World
Course # for this class according to sjsu, is 27993, not 55471 - via your syllabus
"you always have to option to buy certain content" should read you always have the option to buy certain content - via ps3fanboy.com
In the first sentence "we've all ideas" should read we all have ideas - via engadget.com
"fifth-grade" should read fifth-grader via- engadget.com
Extra "the" in second paragraph - via joystiq.com
"you always have to option to buy certain content" should read you always have the option to buy certain content - via ps3fanboy.com
In the first sentence "we've all ideas" should read we all have ideas - via engadget.com
"fifth-grade" should read fifth-grader via- engadget.com
Extra "the" in second paragraph - via joystiq.com
Week 5 - Feauture Lead
Feature Lead
NEW YORK – A squirrel stopped the commute of 47,000 people Monday afternoon when it climbed up the Metro-North Commuter Railroad power lines and set off an incredible chain of events.
While the squirrel was scampering around atop the lines, he unwittingly got himself electrocuted. The resulting power surge of the lone squirrel’s adventure weakened an overhead bracket, leaving a dangling live wire in an oncoming train’s path.
The wire became entangled with the passing train and ultimately caused the entire web of wires to be ripped down at high speeds.
The resulting incident left thousands of people stranded and waiting in Manhattan. The commuters all had to change their plans seeing as how the entire system was down until early Tuesday morning when crews finally got the power up and running.
No injuries were reported except for the loss of the adventurous squirrel.
NEW YORK – A squirrel stopped the commute of 47,000 people Monday afternoon when it climbed up the Metro-North Commuter Railroad power lines and set off an incredible chain of events.
While the squirrel was scampering around atop the lines, he unwittingly got himself electrocuted. The resulting power surge of the lone squirrel’s adventure weakened an overhead bracket, leaving a dangling live wire in an oncoming train’s path.
The wire became entangled with the passing train and ultimately caused the entire web of wires to be ripped down at high speeds.
The resulting incident left thousands of people stranded and waiting in Manhattan. The commuters all had to change their plans seeing as how the entire system was down until early Tuesday morning when crews finally got the power up and running.
No injuries were reported except for the loss of the adventurous squirrel.
Week 5 - News Story 3 & 4
News Story #3
A high-pressure gas pipe ruptured yesterday near Folsom and 11th Street, forcing near-by business owners and residents to evacuate a four-block area.
Around 12:30 p.m., a private construction crew was repairing sewer lines. During their repairs, they tore a two-inch gas pipe in half with a backhoe, resulting in a complete traffic gridlock and at least a 100-person evacuation.
Carlann Lauria, manager of Crocker’s Lockers, a self-storage facility on Folsom and 10th Street, says her customers,” ..were pretty irate.” However, her employees kept busy, collecting payments from their patrons outside the affected area.
The manager of Wa-Ha-Ka restaurant, Samantha Feldman, says she was forced to evacuate her building. The restaurant is located right next to the ruptured pipe. Ms. Feldman says the evacuation cost her at least $500 worth of business.
At the time of this writing, the pipe has been repaired according to PG&E. The gas was turned back on at 5:09 p.m.
News Story # 4
Last Saturday night, Alan Tiscas-Soto, a 21-year-old man stole a car from a newly married couple, with the bride still in the front seat.
According to Sheryl Wolcott, a San Mateo County deputy district attorney, after their wedding on Saturday on their way to a romantic night at Embassy Suites, the couple stopped by Taco Bell on East Fourth Avenue in San Mateo, to subdue a late night snack craving. Not wanting his wife to get her wedding dress dirty and being more maneuverable in his tuxedo, the groom left the car running, with her inside as he walked into Taco Bell. The groom hadn’t even made it all the way through the door, when a man came rushing out and hopped into the groom’s still running automobile.
Frantic, the groom ran outside to the passenger door of his 2003 Nissan Altima, and tried desperately to get his wife out of the vehicle. The man attempting the carjacking was having a hard time getting the Nissan into gear, so luckily the groom had enough time and was able to get her out before the crazed carjacker crashed the car into a Taco Bell sign. After the crash, the carjacker got out of the car and ran away. Neither the groom nor the bride sustained any injuries. Witnesses immediately called the police.
Shortly after the incident, officer Brendan Boyle noticed a man resembling the suspect’s description running southbound on South Delaware Street and Ninth Avenue. Boyle called for backup and arrested the suspect without incident. However, police say that Mr. Tiscas-Soto told them he was high on methamphetamines for three straight days at the time of arrest.
Currently, Tiscas-Soto, is being held in San Mateo County Jail on a $100,000 bail. He is facing felony carjacking charges and misdemeanor drug charges. He does not have a criminal record. He pleaded not guilty on Monday in San Mateo Superior Court.
Sheryl Wolcott stated that the county private defender program has assigned no attorney to Mr. Tiscas-Soto as of yet. However, Ms. Wolcott also says that if the accused is found guilty, he could face up to nine years in state prison. A preliminary hearing is scheduled later this year on May 10th.
The couple’s names were not released at the time of this writing.
A high-pressure gas pipe ruptured yesterday near Folsom and 11th Street, forcing near-by business owners and residents to evacuate a four-block area.
Around 12:30 p.m., a private construction crew was repairing sewer lines. During their repairs, they tore a two-inch gas pipe in half with a backhoe, resulting in a complete traffic gridlock and at least a 100-person evacuation.
Carlann Lauria, manager of Crocker’s Lockers, a self-storage facility on Folsom and 10th Street, says her customers,” ..were pretty irate.” However, her employees kept busy, collecting payments from their patrons outside the affected area.
The manager of Wa-Ha-Ka restaurant, Samantha Feldman, says she was forced to evacuate her building. The restaurant is located right next to the ruptured pipe. Ms. Feldman says the evacuation cost her at least $500 worth of business.
At the time of this writing, the pipe has been repaired according to PG&E. The gas was turned back on at 5:09 p.m.
News Story # 4
Last Saturday night, Alan Tiscas-Soto, a 21-year-old man stole a car from a newly married couple, with the bride still in the front seat.
According to Sheryl Wolcott, a San Mateo County deputy district attorney, after their wedding on Saturday on their way to a romantic night at Embassy Suites, the couple stopped by Taco Bell on East Fourth Avenue in San Mateo, to subdue a late night snack craving. Not wanting his wife to get her wedding dress dirty and being more maneuverable in his tuxedo, the groom left the car running, with her inside as he walked into Taco Bell. The groom hadn’t even made it all the way through the door, when a man came rushing out and hopped into the groom’s still running automobile.
Frantic, the groom ran outside to the passenger door of his 2003 Nissan Altima, and tried desperately to get his wife out of the vehicle. The man attempting the carjacking was having a hard time getting the Nissan into gear, so luckily the groom had enough time and was able to get her out before the crazed carjacker crashed the car into a Taco Bell sign. After the crash, the carjacker got out of the car and ran away. Neither the groom nor the bride sustained any injuries. Witnesses immediately called the police.
Shortly after the incident, officer Brendan Boyle noticed a man resembling the suspect’s description running southbound on South Delaware Street and Ninth Avenue. Boyle called for backup and arrested the suspect without incident. However, police say that Mr. Tiscas-Soto told them he was high on methamphetamines for three straight days at the time of arrest.
Currently, Tiscas-Soto, is being held in San Mateo County Jail on a $100,000 bail. He is facing felony carjacking charges and misdemeanor drug charges. He does not have a criminal record. He pleaded not guilty on Monday in San Mateo Superior Court.
Sheryl Wolcott stated that the county private defender program has assigned no attorney to Mr. Tiscas-Soto as of yet. However, Ms. Wolcott also says that if the accused is found guilty, he could face up to nine years in state prison. A preliminary hearing is scheduled later this year on May 10th.
The couple’s names were not released at the time of this writing.
Sunday, February 17, 2008
Week 2 - Top News
Largest Beef Recall Ever!
According to MSNBC, the U.S. Department of Agriculture recalled 143 million pounds of frozen beef today from Chino, California Westland/Hallmark Meat Company. The recall is based on evidence found by Ed Schafer, the Secretary of Agriculture, which proves the animals were routinely not given proper veterinary care when needed. "Because the cattle did not receive complete and proper inspection, Food Safety and Inspection Service has determined them to be unfit for human food," says Mr. Schafer.
Perhaps one of the most disturbing facts of this story is that 37 million pounds of this recalled beef has already been distributed to schools and is believed to have been consumed. And yet, the recall is for food from Feb 1, 2006. Way to go. Recall all the food after it has been eaten.
This is an incredible story. When I was reading about the horrible things being done to the animals, I couldn't help but picture a man with a white beard, a large top hat, and a huge monocle on one eye. Every part of this story screams wealthy tyrant. I would have to agree with Sen. Tom Harkin, and his question, "This begs the question: how much longer will we continue to test our luck with weak enforcement of federal food safety regulations?" I wish I knew the answer, but I threw out all of my meat in the fridge. How should I know where it came from? There isn't much truth to labels these days, just deception.
To the USDA, U.S. Government, or anyone who has power in the food industry. If there is any chance of a food product being tainted, recall it. Don't wait for preliminary investigations when there are lives at stake. Makes you wish everyone had Obsessive Compulsive Disorder. The world would be a much better/worse place.
Link found here: http://www.msnbc.msn.com/id/23212514/
The news values associated with this story are impact, prominence, timeliness, proximity, and currency.
Even if only one person bought a pound of beef each, this recall has the potential to affect a minimum of 143 million people. And since the factory was California based, it's safe to assume that whether you shop at Safeway, eat Jack in the Box, or In-N-Out is more your cup of tea, you have consumed some of this recalled meat. Scary thought isn't it?
According to MSNBC, the U.S. Department of Agriculture recalled 143 million pounds of frozen beef today from Chino, California Westland/Hallmark Meat Company. The recall is based on evidence found by Ed Schafer, the Secretary of Agriculture, which proves the animals were routinely not given proper veterinary care when needed. "Because the cattle did not receive complete and proper inspection, Food Safety and Inspection Service has determined them to be unfit for human food," says Mr. Schafer.
Perhaps one of the most disturbing facts of this story is that 37 million pounds of this recalled beef has already been distributed to schools and is believed to have been consumed. And yet, the recall is for food from Feb 1, 2006. Way to go. Recall all the food after it has been eaten.
This is an incredible story. When I was reading about the horrible things being done to the animals, I couldn't help but picture a man with a white beard, a large top hat, and a huge monocle on one eye. Every part of this story screams wealthy tyrant. I would have to agree with Sen. Tom Harkin, and his question, "This begs the question: how much longer will we continue to test our luck with weak enforcement of federal food safety regulations?" I wish I knew the answer, but I threw out all of my meat in the fridge. How should I know where it came from? There isn't much truth to labels these days, just deception.
To the USDA, U.S. Government, or anyone who has power in the food industry. If there is any chance of a food product being tainted, recall it. Don't wait for preliminary investigations when there are lives at stake. Makes you wish everyone had Obsessive Compulsive Disorder. The world would be a much better/worse place.
Link found here: http://www.msnbc.msn.com/id/23212514/
The news values associated with this story are impact, prominence, timeliness, proximity, and currency.
Even if only one person bought a pound of beef each, this recall has the potential to affect a minimum of 143 million people. And since the factory was California based, it's safe to assume that whether you shop at Safeway, eat Jack in the Box, or In-N-Out is more your cup of tea, you have consumed some of this recalled meat. Scary thought isn't it?
Week 2 - Leads
Lead #1
A local couple was awarded $150,00 in damages yesterday at Butte County Court, after suffering injuries from an accident in March.
Leads #2
Another snowstorm is expected to hit the Sierras again today, and more are on the way.
Leads #3
According to the police, a fire erupted at 204 Union Avenue today injuring three firefighters and forcing 41 families to evacuate a six-story building.
Lead Exercise #2
A US Air airplane on its way from Chicago plummeted into the ground yesterday as the plane was approaching the runway. All 131 people on board were killed resulting in the worst air disaster in the U.S. in the past three years.
A local couple was awarded $150,00 in damages yesterday at Butte County Court, after suffering injuries from an accident in March.
Leads #2
Another snowstorm is expected to hit the Sierras again today, and more are on the way.
Leads #3
According to the police, a fire erupted at 204 Union Avenue today injuring three firefighters and forcing 41 families to evacuate a six-story building.
Lead Exercise #2
A US Air airplane on its way from Chicago plummeted into the ground yesterday as the plane was approaching the runway. All 131 people on board were killed resulting in the worst air disaster in the U.S. in the past three years.
Week 4 - AP Style Quiz E-H
1) His new book, on elections and the Electoral College, is titled “Does Your Vote Count?" (4)
2) Brianna looked so sad that he wanted to envelop her in his arms and give her a big hug; but he was afraid the attention might faze her. (2)
3) They were so impressed by her flair for decorating, that they offered praise and agreed to distribute her promotional flier. (3)
4) He suspected his neighbor was selling drugs, so he called the FBI. His neighbor, however, cried foul at the accusation. (2)
5) The boys' stories didn’t jibe, so their father threw down the gauntlet and demanded the truth. (2)
6) My great-grandfather is a real gourmet, so I always let him pick the wine whenever we have dinner. (2)
2) Brianna looked so sad that he wanted to envelop her in his arms and give her a big hug; but he was afraid the attention might faze her. (2)
3) They were so impressed by her flair for decorating, that they offered praise and agreed to distribute her promotional flier. (3)
4) He suspected his neighbor was selling drugs, so he called the FBI. His neighbor, however, cried foul at the accusation. (2)
5) The boys' stories didn’t jibe, so their father threw down the gauntlet and demanded the truth. (2)
6) My great-grandfather is a real gourmet, so I always let him pick the wine whenever we have dinner. (2)
Saturday, February 16, 2008
Week 4 - Top News
"HD War" is over?
(This story is based on the premise that Reuters is correct in their scoop)
When I awoke this morning, I found it no surprise that Reuters confirmed that Toshiba, the main driving force behind the HD-DVD format, would no longer be manufacturing HD-DVD players. However, it is somewhat of a surprise to see them just drop manufacturing altogether. If Reuters is correct, the company stands to lose hundreds of millions of dollars on this decision. But why would they decide to stop the production?
There have been many queues in the past several months, but it all started back in June 2007. The domino that started it all was Blockbuster, when they decided to go Blu-Ray only and not offer HD-DVD to their customers (however, let it be known, that I have never seen an HD-DVD or Blu-Ray disc in any Blockbuster ever - apparently they are only carried at select locations.). The world seemed to shrug this decision by Blockbuster off, because their revenue was down and their company seemed to be fading away (thanks to Netflix). Then in January 2008, Warner Bros. Studios stopped manufacturing their movies on HD-DVD format and decided to go completely Blu-Ray. This brought them up to par with the likes of Disney. Then just this week alone, both Netflix and Wal-Mart, the biggest seller of all DVD media, dropped the HD-DVD format for Blu-Ray discs.
This strange play of events has one company extremely happy and soon to be much richer; Sony. Top game analysts and major game publishers called the mandatory inclusion of a Blu-Ray player in the Playstation 3 (PS3), which resulted in a higher price tag, a huge mistake. They claimed the high price tag would discourage the average consumer from purchasing the new Playstation 3 (PS3). Apparently Sony gambled on the right format, because it looks like they won their first format war, after losing every other one in the past (ATRAC, Betamax, UMD)
This story has impact and timeliness due to the fact that people who already purchased HD-DVD players are out of luck and people that were on the fence waiting for war to end can now buy the winner with no buyer's remorse.
This story most certainly also has prominence because of Sony's defeat in the past. No one thought they would win, but yet here they are.
Last but not least, this story also has currency. This directly affects the high definition era in the years to come. Now instead of deciding whether to buy an HD-DVD player, or a Blu-Ray player based on movie availability, the public will now have to worry about buying the "most affordable" Blu-Ray player.
Link found here: http://www.reuters.com/article/ousiv/idUSL1643184420080216
(This story is based on the premise that Reuters is correct in their scoop)
When I awoke this morning, I found it no surprise that Reuters confirmed that Toshiba, the main driving force behind the HD-DVD format, would no longer be manufacturing HD-DVD players. However, it is somewhat of a surprise to see them just drop manufacturing altogether. If Reuters is correct, the company stands to lose hundreds of millions of dollars on this decision. But why would they decide to stop the production?
There have been many queues in the past several months, but it all started back in June 2007. The domino that started it all was Blockbuster, when they decided to go Blu-Ray only and not offer HD-DVD to their customers (however, let it be known, that I have never seen an HD-DVD or Blu-Ray disc in any Blockbuster ever - apparently they are only carried at select locations.). The world seemed to shrug this decision by Blockbuster off, because their revenue was down and their company seemed to be fading away (thanks to Netflix). Then in January 2008, Warner Bros. Studios stopped manufacturing their movies on HD-DVD format and decided to go completely Blu-Ray. This brought them up to par with the likes of Disney. Then just this week alone, both Netflix and Wal-Mart, the biggest seller of all DVD media, dropped the HD-DVD format for Blu-Ray discs.
This strange play of events has one company extremely happy and soon to be much richer; Sony. Top game analysts and major game publishers called the mandatory inclusion of a Blu-Ray player in the Playstation 3 (PS3), which resulted in a higher price tag, a huge mistake. They claimed the high price tag would discourage the average consumer from purchasing the new Playstation 3 (PS3). Apparently Sony gambled on the right format, because it looks like they won their first format war, after losing every other one in the past (ATRAC, Betamax, UMD)
This story has impact and timeliness due to the fact that people who already purchased HD-DVD players are out of luck and people that were on the fence waiting for war to end can now buy the winner with no buyer's remorse.
This story most certainly also has prominence because of Sony's defeat in the past. No one thought they would win, but yet here they are.
Last but not least, this story also has currency. This directly affects the high definition era in the years to come. Now instead of deciding whether to buy an HD-DVD player, or a Blu-Ray player based on movie availability, the public will now have to worry about buying the "most affordable" Blu-Ray player.
Link found here: http://www.reuters.com/article/ousiv/idUSL1643184420080216
Friday, February 15, 2008
Week 4 - News Story 1 & 2
New Story #1
Firefighters Save Man
Yesterday in San Jose, a fire broke out on Annapolis Way, engulfing a single-story home and leaving a man in grave condition at Valley Medical Center.
When firefighters arrived at around 3 p.m., they found Robert Kent, lying unconscious on the kitchen floor of his home surrounded by flames. While the fire is still under investigation, it appears to have started in the kitchen and worked its way to the attic. There were no smoke detectors found throughout the house.
According to Rob Piper, the San Jose fire Captain, Mr. Kent, who appears to be in his 50s and a retiree, has second and third-degree burns on 50 percent of his body. A nursing supervisor confirms that Mr. Kent is still listed in grave condition.
News Story #2
Cathedral Robbery
A couple from Taiwan was robbed at gunpoint yesterday in the Saint Mary Cathedral's parking lot.
According to Sgt. Lawrence Price of the San Francisco Police Department, police are on the lookout for a man who was last seen wearing a black jacket, and a black cap; approximately 18 years of age.
On a tour from Taipei, WeiMing Chen, 28, and his wife Li Lu, 30 became separated from their group around 10 a.m. After making their way to the lower parking lot, they were approached by a man who demanded their money while waving a gun around in the air.
The couple gave the man all they had, including their cash, their visas, their camera, their passports, and their airline tickets. After obtaining what he wanted, the assailant took off running.
It is still unclear if the couple made their 1 p.m. flight back to Taipei with the rest of their tour group.
Firefighters Save Man
Yesterday in San Jose, a fire broke out on Annapolis Way, engulfing a single-story home and leaving a man in grave condition at Valley Medical Center.
When firefighters arrived at around 3 p.m., they found Robert Kent, lying unconscious on the kitchen floor of his home surrounded by flames. While the fire is still under investigation, it appears to have started in the kitchen and worked its way to the attic. There were no smoke detectors found throughout the house.
According to Rob Piper, the San Jose fire Captain, Mr. Kent, who appears to be in his 50s and a retiree, has second and third-degree burns on 50 percent of his body. A nursing supervisor confirms that Mr. Kent is still listed in grave condition.
News Story #2
Cathedral Robbery
A couple from Taiwan was robbed at gunpoint yesterday in the Saint Mary Cathedral's parking lot.
According to Sgt. Lawrence Price of the San Francisco Police Department, police are on the lookout for a man who was last seen wearing a black jacket, and a black cap; approximately 18 years of age.
On a tour from Taipei, WeiMing Chen, 28, and his wife Li Lu, 30 became separated from their group around 10 a.m. After making their way to the lower parking lot, they were approached by a man who demanded their money while waving a gun around in the air.
The couple gave the man all they had, including their cash, their visas, their camera, their passports, and their airline tickets. After obtaining what he wanted, the assailant took off running.
It is still unclear if the couple made their 1 p.m. flight back to Taipei with the rest of their tour group.
Week 3 - AP Style Quiz A-D
1) Mayor Richard Wrigley expressed confidence that the gubernatorial debate, which begins at 7:30 p.m. (removed this evening), will have a positive effect on his candidacy. He added, “Gov. Red Davidson is a master of dirty politics, but I won’t take any of his baloney.” (4)
2) For her birthday, the nine-year-old girl invited five good friends over for ice cream and cake. The chocolate cake was so tasty that any one of the children could have eaten it all; but they carefully divided it among themselves. (4)
3) Persuaded of the bill’s importance, members of the Democratic and Republican parties came together on Capitol Hill to support anti-terrorism legislation, despite their differences on other issues. (4)
4) ROME – All around the world, Roman Catholics today listened as the pope delivered his homily. (3)
2) For her birthday, the nine-year-old girl invited five good friends over for ice cream and cake. The chocolate cake was so tasty that any one of the children could have eaten it all; but they carefully divided it among themselves. (4)
3) Persuaded of the bill’s importance, members of the Democratic and Republican parties came together on Capitol Hill to support anti-terrorism legislation, despite their differences on other issues. (4)
4) ROME – All around the world, Roman Catholics today listened as the pope delivered his homily. (3)
Saturday, February 9, 2008
Week 3 - Top News
Microsoft Bids for Yahoo
Last Friday, February 1, 2008, Microsoft offered Yahoo an incredible buy-out opportunity. Microsoft threw on the table a $44.6 billion deal, where they agreed to pay Yahoo $31 per share over the current price of $28.95. This deal seemed far too nice, as it was more than 62% of what Yahoo was worth at the time. Many analysts were unsure as to whether or not Yahoo would accept the deal, due to anti-trust issues, and the yearning for independence. However, all that changed yesterday when word leaked on the Internet that come Monday, Yahoo will reject the bid.
Now Microsoft isn’t known for being the type of company that gives up easily so I doubt this minor rejection will set back their spirits one bit. From a company standpoint, it doesn’t seem like a smart move on Yahoo’s part due to the fact that they’ve been declining for more than four quarters. However, from a consumer’s standpoint, it’s certainly refreshing to see that not everyone is looking for an easy way out. If Microsoft and Yahoo were to merge, then that would limit the consumer even more. There is already very few choices out there for operating systems and search engines and to combine these two monoliths together could result in an ugly uniformity no one is ready for.
This story most certainly carries an impact news value. This would-be-take-over can potentially affect millions of individuals.
You can check this story out on all major news networks, but MSNBC seems to have the nicest layout. Link below:
http://www.msnbc.msn.com/id/23084127/
Last Friday, February 1, 2008, Microsoft offered Yahoo an incredible buy-out opportunity. Microsoft threw on the table a $44.6 billion deal, where they agreed to pay Yahoo $31 per share over the current price of $28.95. This deal seemed far too nice, as it was more than 62% of what Yahoo was worth at the time. Many analysts were unsure as to whether or not Yahoo would accept the deal, due to anti-trust issues, and the yearning for independence. However, all that changed yesterday when word leaked on the Internet that come Monday, Yahoo will reject the bid.
Now Microsoft isn’t known for being the type of company that gives up easily so I doubt this minor rejection will set back their spirits one bit. From a company standpoint, it doesn’t seem like a smart move on Yahoo’s part due to the fact that they’ve been declining for more than four quarters. However, from a consumer’s standpoint, it’s certainly refreshing to see that not everyone is looking for an easy way out. If Microsoft and Yahoo were to merge, then that would limit the consumer even more. There is already very few choices out there for operating systems and search engines and to combine these two monoliths together could result in an ugly uniformity no one is ready for.
This story most certainly carries an impact news value. This would-be-take-over can potentially affect millions of individuals.
You can check this story out on all major news networks, but MSNBC seems to have the nicest layout. Link below:
http://www.msnbc.msn.com/id/23084127/
Week 3 - Leads
Leads #4
Smoking Wheels
Forty passengers were evacuated today from Northwest Airlines Flight 428, coming from Minneapolis to LaCrosse, Wisconsin.
The evacuation was mandated after a landing tower employee noticed smoke near the wheels.
Missing Boy
A 7-year-old boy was found Monday night in Brick Township, N.J., after having been missing for three years.
After the movie, Adam: The Song Continues, that aired Monday night, a neighbor immediately recognized the missing child’s picture when it appeared on the screen. Police arrived shortly after, placing Ellen Lynn Conner, 27, under arrest under charges of kidnapping and interfering with a custody warrant.
Leads #5
Fact Set #1: Pipe fitter
Delayed Identification:
A 55-year-old pipe fitter employed by Gross Engineers in Springfield, suffered third-degree burns yesterday when he was installing new pipes on the roof of the Springfield Municipal Power Plant.
Immediate Identification:
At 3 p.m. yesterday, Duane La Chance, a 55-year-old pipe fitter from Springfield was admitted to the hospital after suffering third-degree burns atop the roof of the Springfield Municipal Power Plant.
Fact Set #2: Car accident
Delayed Identification:
At 11:45 a.m. today, two men, ages 19, and 20, got into a head on collision when one of their vehicles crossed the center line on U.S. 63, just North of Blue Ridge Road.
Immediate Identification:
Today at 11:45 a.m., James W. Cunning, age 20, was admitted to the hospital in satisfactory condition when Wayne Clay, age 19, crossed the center line and hit James’ 2005 Ford Focus on U.S. 63.
Smoking Wheels
Forty passengers were evacuated today from Northwest Airlines Flight 428, coming from Minneapolis to LaCrosse, Wisconsin.
The evacuation was mandated after a landing tower employee noticed smoke near the wheels.
Missing Boy
A 7-year-old boy was found Monday night in Brick Township, N.J., after having been missing for three years.
After the movie, Adam: The Song Continues, that aired Monday night, a neighbor immediately recognized the missing child’s picture when it appeared on the screen. Police arrived shortly after, placing Ellen Lynn Conner, 27, under arrest under charges of kidnapping and interfering with a custody warrant.
Leads #5
Fact Set #1: Pipe fitter
Delayed Identification:
A 55-year-old pipe fitter employed by Gross Engineers in Springfield, suffered third-degree burns yesterday when he was installing new pipes on the roof of the Springfield Municipal Power Plant.
Immediate Identification:
At 3 p.m. yesterday, Duane La Chance, a 55-year-old pipe fitter from Springfield was admitted to the hospital after suffering third-degree burns atop the roof of the Springfield Municipal Power Plant.
Fact Set #2: Car accident
Delayed Identification:
At 11:45 a.m. today, two men, ages 19, and 20, got into a head on collision when one of their vehicles crossed the center line on U.S. 63, just North of Blue Ridge Road.
Immediate Identification:
Today at 11:45 a.m., James W. Cunning, age 20, was admitted to the hospital in satisfactory condition when Wayne Clay, age 19, crossed the center line and hit James’ 2005 Ford Focus on U.S. 63.
Wednesday, February 6, 2008
Week 3 - Late Breaking News
Super Bowl Ads 2008
While the Super Bowl this year, was a bit of an upset, the ads during the commercials were anything but. All the major companies were there this year: Coke, Pepsi, Doritos, Bud Light, and Dell. But the company that created the most buzz with their set of commercials had to be E*Trade.
With 3d animation, and Photoshop becoming the industry standard, E*Trade thought it would be clever to use these two amazing types of “truth benders” to make an incredibly clever ad. The first which can be found here, http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gdfvWAp5GUw, courtesy of YouTube, depicts a baby talking directly into the camera. The baby proceeds to address his audience, in the voice of a man no less, and lets them know how much money he saves using E*Trade. Using a form of shock advertising, attention is immediately demanded when the baby starts to speak. Since the audience is not used to having a baby give them advice, there is no choice but to eagerly listen and be amazed at the “real-ish” baby going on about how he makes and saves a ton of money using E*Trade’s services.
The second ad found here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6vW9gUmooFg, also courtesy of YouTube, depicts the same baby, but in an even more comedic manner. Relying still on shock advertising, E*Trade has their star back. This time, instead of the baby saying how much money he saves, which was gathered from the first commercial, the baby shows you how easy the service is. Then after he purchases the stock he throws up all over himself.
These two commercials are great examples of getting a products name, or in this case a company’s service, stuck in your brain. Whenever I see someone I have not seen since the Super Bowl, both of us seem to say at the same time “Hey, did you see that E*Trade commercial?” It’s safe to say that America is asking the same question too, because according to data collected by TiVo, E*Trades commercials made the number one replay spot this year. It would seem that the amount of money they spent on this commercial was more than worth it. Let’s see if their $176 Billion in 4.3 million accounts goes up anytime soon. I’m willing to bet it will.
While the Super Bowl this year, was a bit of an upset, the ads during the commercials were anything but. All the major companies were there this year: Coke, Pepsi, Doritos, Bud Light, and Dell. But the company that created the most buzz with their set of commercials had to be E*Trade.
With 3d animation, and Photoshop becoming the industry standard, E*Trade thought it would be clever to use these two amazing types of “truth benders” to make an incredibly clever ad. The first which can be found here, http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gdfvWAp5GUw, courtesy of YouTube, depicts a baby talking directly into the camera. The baby proceeds to address his audience, in the voice of a man no less, and lets them know how much money he saves using E*Trade. Using a form of shock advertising, attention is immediately demanded when the baby starts to speak. Since the audience is not used to having a baby give them advice, there is no choice but to eagerly listen and be amazed at the “real-ish” baby going on about how he makes and saves a ton of money using E*Trade’s services.
The second ad found here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6vW9gUmooFg, also courtesy of YouTube, depicts the same baby, but in an even more comedic manner. Relying still on shock advertising, E*Trade has their star back. This time, instead of the baby saying how much money he saves, which was gathered from the first commercial, the baby shows you how easy the service is. Then after he purchases the stock he throws up all over himself.
These two commercials are great examples of getting a products name, or in this case a company’s service, stuck in your brain. Whenever I see someone I have not seen since the Super Bowl, both of us seem to say at the same time “Hey, did you see that E*Trade commercial?” It’s safe to say that America is asking the same question too, because according to data collected by TiVo, E*Trades commercials made the number one replay spot this year. It would seem that the amount of money they spent on this commercial was more than worth it. Let’s see if their $176 Billion in 4.3 million accounts goes up anytime soon. I’m willing to bet it will.
Monday, February 4, 2008
Week 1 - Who am I?
Doctors certainly come in different shapes and sizes, and attitudes. One doesn't even look at me, just asks questions, as if I'm a nurse practitioner. Yeah, sure I KNOW what's wrong with me. That's why I'm at the hospital. Genius. People these days. Takes 5 different doctors to actually get me the medication I need to stop the bleeding and bam! I'm allergic.
A trip to the emergency room certainly turned into a vacation - unwanted. My throat collapsed on itself due to the reaction to the medication, and Benadryl had no affect on me. So what is their solution. Nothing. No one knows what the hell is wrong with me. So why do they get paid 6 figures, to not even look at me, and just push papers? Where's the good ole doctors that would come to your house and listen to your heart and do the best they could to make you feel better. Try. What a perfect word. Try harder. Now that's even better. To all you doctors out there that think of your patients as pieces of paper - try harder. You wouldn't want me to beat around the bush if you came into my emergency room would you?
Now back to the question at hand. Who am I? That's a good question, but not one easily answered. Perhaps the beginning is a nice place to start, but perhaps working backwards is sometimes fun as well. I'm a junior at San Jose State University. Great, so what? So are thousands of other kids. Yes, but how did i get here? Hard work? Dedication? Yeah maybe, but that's how i got into San Diego State University. So why am I here at San Jose State University? I'm sure you've guessed it by now - because of a female.
Not too long ago, i was a student at San Diego State, but although my mind was where it wanted to be, my heart was elsewhere. It was alright for a little while, but being out on my own, with no one - not even a loved one - was tough. So i gave up. Plain and simple. I wanted to come back to San Jose, so i made sure that I got over here through any means necessary. And now that I'm back I couldn't be any happier (minus the frequent trips to the emergency room). Whatever.
I'm 21 years old, going on 22 here very shortly. Every now and then I'll feel like an adult, but it's kinda hard to when all i do is watch cartoons. BUT, there is an excuse. That's what i want to do with my life - animate. Not draw cartoons, but animate using 3d animation programs like Maya and 3d Studio Max. So I'm always watching what's new to get wonderful new ideas. My dream would be to work at Pixar Animation Studios doing anything. ANYTHING. Almost anything. Anything productive. Voice acting, animating, writing, storyboards, whatever. It would be the fulfillment of a lifetime goal for sure.
So i figured a writing for media class would be an excellent step in the right direction. Also, having not taken an english class since 1B a year or so ago, some writing practice would do me wonders. So hopefully, this class will help me brush up on some skills i know, but may have forgotten, and teach me new ones i can utilize in my career. Also, it's nice to be forced to keep up with current events once in a while. Because frankly, sometimes i just don't care - and that's a shame.
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