Saturday, March 15, 2008

Week 8 - Copy Edit the World

The text reads "It that really you?" instead of "Is that really you?"
- Via Super Mario 64 on both the Nintendo DS and the Nintendo 64 (both are renditions of the same game)

Going through my wallet, I noticed I had an expired card. However right before I threw it away, I noticed they misspelled "thru" as trhu. The card is used to receive discounts at several retailers
- Via Microsoft, Xbox Live

The text should read "several new bits of information" (or something comparable) instead of "several new info"
- Via ps3fanboy.com



It should read online play has been improved, not have been
- Via ps3fanboy.com



The text reads, "going forwards…” It should read going forward.
- Via Joystiq.com


The word "be" is missing from "our program will supporting LCD monitors that are..."
- Via official PG&E website

1 comment:

camccune said...

6 x 4 = 24 points

Good job!