"you always have to option to buy certain content" should read you always have the option to buy certain content - via ps3fanboy.com

In the first sentence "we've all ideas" should read we all have ideas - via engadget.com

"fifth-grade" should read fifth-grader via- engadget.com

Extra "the" in second paragraph - via joystiq.com

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4+2+2+2+2 = 12 points
Good catch on my syllabus page -- that's a four-pointer. I must have missed updating that for the spring semester.
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